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You never really left
Even though the day she left happend so fast that it beame a blurr,
Even though she left the earth we didn't really loose her.
I can feel her in the wind on my face,
I can hear her voice attempting to soothe me whenever my mind starts to race.
I can see her face when I look at my reflection,
No matter where we go somehow our souls will never loose this connection.
Even though she left the earth we didn't really loose her.
I can feel her in the wind on my face,
I can hear her voice attempting to soothe me whenever my mind starts to race.
I can see her face when I look at my reflection,
No matter where we go somehow our souls will never loose this connection.
Published 30th Mar 2020
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30th Mar 2020 2:40am
Dear M,
Your poem swells with loss and I’m sorry for that. Your last stanza is beautifully written to me, there will be reminders of the love shared until you can meet again. It’s a lovely write given the subject. H🌷
Your poem swells with loss and I’m sorry for that. Your last stanza is beautifully written to me, there will be reminders of the love shared until you can meet again. It’s a lovely write given the subject. H🌷
