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No poet
I'm no poet
I merely wish to tell you these things...
But you lay on one ear and pull your covers over the other
I merely wish to tell you these things...
But you lay on one ear and pull your covers over the other
Published 27th Mar 2020
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27th Mar 2020 2:47am
Dear S,
For me, this piece represents conversations with my husband🙄. You have gathered a typical scenario extremely well. It’s a very charming piece, I really enjoyed it. H🌷
For me, this piece represents conversations with my husband🙄. You have gathered a typical scenario extremely well. It’s a very charming piece, I really enjoyed it. H🌷
19th Apr 2020 00:26am
It pleases me that this is somewhat relatable to you.I thank you for your feedback
19th Apr 2020 00:19am
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23rd Apr 2020 2:28pm
We are poetry of life that needs attention, but what we say falls on deaf ears.
Hi shakespearan-sweet.Indeed.I think in a way,the harder it is to tell,the deeper it becomes.you've put it just right"poetry of life"I like that interpretation.
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