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Even from a distance you chase me
Why did I move my hips against you so uncontrollably,
I knew you would accept my challenge.
Now it is a challenge to forget yours.
Why did I abuse your face, now you can't forget my taste
(you told me in a letter you wrote).
Can't remember why I told you about my deepest desires.
Mind bewilderment.
Especially because almost all of them have become reality.
Why did I kiss you so tenderly,
should have known that these kisses would overwrite history inside my mind
Maybe won't ever find that degree of tenderness again.
Dangerous discovery.
Yes, I believed your sweet words, they sounded so sincere.
Now all they do is make me doubt my own intellect.
Why did it end, if everything we said was true.
Yet the sound of your whispers, the movement of your buttocks,
your ability to move so deep within me,
the memory of your hard pulsating cock,
they aren't leaving me.
My memory only seems to remember the things I so badly want to forget.
Even the smell of your body, the look in your eyes,
your face when you came, the way you spoke my name,
the touch, the caresses afterwards, even the little things.
Like a virus, I don't have antibodies against,
I'm weak when it comes to you.
And even now, while I know it can never be the way it was,
my mind is comparing every man with you.
Even from a distance, you chase me.
I knew you would accept my challenge.
Now it is a challenge to forget yours.
Why did I abuse your face, now you can't forget my taste
(you told me in a letter you wrote).
Can't remember why I told you about my deepest desires.
Mind bewilderment.
Especially because almost all of them have become reality.
Why did I kiss you so tenderly,
should have known that these kisses would overwrite history inside my mind
Maybe won't ever find that degree of tenderness again.
Dangerous discovery.
Yes, I believed your sweet words, they sounded so sincere.
Now all they do is make me doubt my own intellect.
Why did it end, if everything we said was true.
Yet the sound of your whispers, the movement of your buttocks,
your ability to move so deep within me,
the memory of your hard pulsating cock,
they aren't leaving me.
My memory only seems to remember the things I so badly want to forget.
Even the smell of your body, the look in your eyes,
your face when you came, the way you spoke my name,
the touch, the caresses afterwards, even the little things.
Like a virus, I don't have antibodies against,
I'm weak when it comes to you.
And even now, while I know it can never be the way it was,
my mind is comparing every man with you.
Even from a distance, you chase me.
Published 22nd Mar 2020
| Edited 23rd Mar 2020
Author's Note
This came to mind. It's about two lovers, wishing things would have worked out differently. It's not about me. 23-03-'20 wasn't happy with the poem so I adjusted it, hope you like it
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Anonymous
25th Mar 2020 12:10pm
I like it, I can feel the longing and torment. I also get the sense of betrayal.
25th Mar 2020 12:50pm
If I am able to make one feel those emotions, you just made me very happy. So thank you.!
28th Mar 2020 9:10pm
Nicely captured the initial passion, a breach of trust, trying to move on but the lustful memories makes it impossible to do so.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
5th Apr 2020 5:56pm
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