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Love Hoax
Love is a hoax , a cruel joke composed of complex chemical reactions, attractions and social interactions. Where it is more defined by time and presence then something we perceive to be something manifested from the heavens.
The first one you said I love you did you feel any difference cause on the outside it still sounded the same
Still probably lit up the face of the reviecer before either party knew it would change.
I mean it's not like when fucking we moan any different,
Do you crave it from everyone you love as much as you beg the one you currently love to give it
But in today's world you get one chance with everyone to pretend
Before you meet another and begin acting out love actions all over again
The first one you said I love you did you feel any difference cause on the outside it still sounded the same
Still probably lit up the face of the reviecer before either party knew it would change.
I mean it's not like when fucking we moan any different,
Do you crave it from everyone you love as much as you beg the one you currently love to give it
But in today's world you get one chance with everyone to pretend
Before you meet another and begin acting out love actions all over again
Published 11th Mar 2020
| Edited 12th Mar 2020
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11th Mar 2020 5:42pm
Greetings,
You said a two mouthfuls with this one brother.... You regurgitated the truth in the face of love liars unapologetically... "still probably lit up the face of the receiver before either party knew it would change" that is the dagger line... "defined by time and presence than something manifested from heaven." So true... that's why most of us remain on emotional hamster wheels completing full revolutions of failed relationships!! Good piece of writing... you may want to spell check a few things for clarity.. Thanks for sharing and keep it going!!
You said a two mouthfuls with this one brother.... You regurgitated the truth in the face of love liars unapologetically... "still probably lit up the face of the receiver before either party knew it would change" that is the dagger line... "defined by time and presence than something manifested from heaven." So true... that's why most of us remain on emotional hamster wheels completing full revolutions of failed relationships!! Good piece of writing... you may want to spell check a few things for clarity.. Thanks for sharing and keep it going!!
12th Mar 2020 00:05am
So glad you enjoyed and connected with it,
And yes I need to slow down a bit , so its doesnt distract or take away
Thanks
And yes I need to slow down a bit , so its doesnt distract or take away
Thanks
