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how could you
How can you just sit there Thinking everythings ok When i am over here crying How could you hurt me like you did I cant believe you I should have know better What was i thinking You stole my words My poem that came from my heart Just to make your self look good How could you Why don't you just rip out the left of my words Then i wil just be a mime and Then i will never use my words again But then i cant be hurt just like you just hurt me The only thing you say is Im sorry Is that supposed to make me feel better All i can think or say is How could you!
Published 11th Mar 2020
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18th Mar 2020 2:30pm
I feel your dispare, it comes across very clearly.
Just watch where you use capital letters and maybe try to break the poem down into shorter lines.
Keep writing, great job 😊
Just watch where you use capital letters and maybe try to break the poem down into shorter lines.
Keep writing, great job 😊
