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super~c r i t i c a l singularity
1.
(t)he. f i r e~eye
even his each breath rushes rapidfire high
...and those subtly arrowed somethings
of his mountainously throbbing laryngeal
bumps ..are metallic artillery ..stingingly
haunting this stirring soulwell.. in a stringy
pulling deep, to a sudden swollen slithery
pro~liberative predisposal bud~b(l)oom..
of a muskening midnight's wild~jasmine
..
2.
once, an i c y apocalysping bon~f i r e
the fluorescein~ed magnesial chromatic greens
...are in a spectacular artic auroral magnificence..
the epic bioscope skies tonight ploy a meticulous
background... the steely~ rimmed four quarterly
windowing many sun~ lanterned tents in carnival
celebration for once before all.. casts elongating
shadows of their soiled & slanted murmurous
magnifications.. over the glossy iced opacity
walls of a vastly lost iglooless expanse... a lastly
charring mass burial's stenchy smoke clouds is
thus in miscibility with the listlessly solidified ice
.
3.
so. play on the petty petrified island~ minds
n o t h i n g ever remains. but
the boundless o n e in 'some'
fusion, the t r u t h
Published 3rd Mar 2020
Author's Note
just a short scribble. inspired by love , the utmost truth. you know .For Us xx
part 2 & pic (web) esp.inspired by visuals n a partial plot of recent web series..
part 2 & pic (web) esp.inspired by visuals n a partial plot of recent web series..
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3rd Mar 2020 7:00pm
Absolute Beauty Uma!!!
Flowing from start to finish its waves soothe!!!
Flowing from start to finish its waves soothe!!!
3rd Mar 2020 7:03pm
There's nothing like your writing Uma. Always an experience to explore. Your ability with impacting imagery is astounding.
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2020 9:53pm
Your words linger long after the book is closed. Inspire my poetic sensibilities like no other. Daniel succinctly captures your 'impacting imagery.' Your mind steals me away to uninhabited islands. Shudder at thought English is not your first language. Love Me xx
4th Mar 2020 1:22am
4th Mar 2020 2:03am
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Poem of the Month!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11293/#469877
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11293/#469877
4th Mar 2020 8:58pm
My favorite part is 2nd, i find it so mesmorizing the imagery of igloo, ice.. frozen like a tomb. The description of the sky and the four corners of the world and the many suns. It reminded me so much of the vast landscape and the endless skies of Alaska (which i visited some moons ago) and the extraordinary of persistence of nature and its love to reproduce.
I know i only highlighted this portion of the poem, but the whole thing in entirety is absolutely magnificent. I can clearly see the beauty of inspiration.
I know i only highlighted this portion of the poem, but the whole thing in entirety is absolutely magnificent. I can clearly see the beauty of inspiration.
I arrive at such images
Your words like halos confirming the brilliance of cosmic orbs
I thought back to a documentary I watched years ago.....a young boy had been taken, had walked of his own free will, high in the Andes, maybe? Was groomed with sacrificial care, then arms around shins,chin on knees, sat down to die of exposure, he was perfectly preserved.......mummified in his arid frozen afterlife...forever gazing off his mountain top, heaven ...until some dude in wire rimmed glasses of anthropological fame, found his new star and put him on TV
Your words inspire freefall of mind and sight
never stop putting them down to page please
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Your words like halos confirming the brilliance of cosmic orbs
I thought back to a documentary I watched years ago.....a young boy had been taken, had walked of his own free will, high in the Andes, maybe? Was groomed with sacrificial care, then arms around shins,chin on knees, sat down to die of exposure, he was perfectly preserved.......mummified in his arid frozen afterlife...forever gazing off his mountain top, heaven ...until some dude in wire rimmed glasses of anthropological fame, found his new star and put him on TV
Your words inspire freefall of mind and sight
never stop putting them down to page please
🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻🗻
