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air on the g-string
grande petite
in scarcity revealing
front and rear triangles.
blind man's treat,
unpeeled and unappealing,
in his blindness dangles
(him cyaan seet!)
while others, glances stealing,
succumb to lust strangles.
bitter-sweet,
her pubescence concealing,
though she wears loose bangles
in the street,
stirring their nether feelings
as her web rage tangles,
in their heat,
men void of sexual healing
though their pubic candles
catch the beat...
© Copyright 2020 February 29
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
in scarcity revealing
front and rear triangles.
blind man's treat,
unpeeled and unappealing,
in his blindness dangles
(him cyaan seet!)
while others, glances stealing,
succumb to lust strangles.
bitter-sweet,
her pubescence concealing,
though she wears loose bangles
in the street,
stirring their nether feelings
as her web rage tangles,
in their heat,
men void of sexual healing
though their pubic candles
catch the beat...
© Copyright 2020 February 29
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 1st Mar 2020
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1st Mar 2020 1:11pm
Bach's Air on the G String is one of my favorite pieces of classical music, so I could not wait to read this. The very form itself is rhythm, and contains its own beat when reading, particularly aloud. It reads as though a very young, prepubescent girl is playing the violin for an older audience, who, though beyond sexual healing, still feel the stimulation that is the power music makes.
Beautifully done, Cab.
Beautifully done, Cab.
2nd Mar 2020 3:21pm
Wow!
Treatise of treatises, Ahavati.
You see right through the poet's cloak and bares his meaning without the batting of an eye. Well done, you who understand the nakedness of concealment and the subtleties of overt action.
Thank you for this excellent analysis, in which your interpretation did not, obviously, lead you into the gutter.
Yours sincerely
cab
Treatise of treatises, Ahavati.
You see right through the poet's cloak and bares his meaning without the batting of an eye. Well done, you who understand the nakedness of concealment and the subtleties of overt action.
Thank you for this excellent analysis, in which your interpretation did not, obviously, lead you into the gutter.
Yours sincerely
cab
