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Raw Sugar
The sun streaks on dirty windshields
Caught up in you
A saffron tinted haze
Foggy reflections of painted paths
set in crumbling stones
Who knew empathy was a physical pain..
( Inside, he shakes me )
Caught up in you
A saffron tinted haze
Foggy reflections of painted paths
set in crumbling stones
Who knew empathy was a physical pain..
( Inside, he shakes me )
Published 12th Jan 2010
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12th Jan 2010 8:08am
...manage to capture something special in a few short lines, Kandice - and Raw Sugar is true to form.
Anonymous
12th Jan 2010 4:08pm
lovely Kandice, from the title,through its few words full of deep feeling a little masterpiece
Anonymous
12th Jan 2010 4:26pm
Beautiful
Concise
Raw
Concise
Raw
14th Jan 2010 1:34am
It's a magic little poem that has such power in so little words. It really speaks to me. x
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