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In an Instant

animated more or less
in a whirlpool coalesced
for a moment then dispersed
in molecules of rhyming verse

synchronizing, feeling one
it's like beating on a drum
through the rhythms which we make
we're transported to a lake

where summer breezes do caress
in a place which I confess
I have been to many times
arriving always in these rhymes

to relax and feel the Sun
in an instant to become
elevated, intertwined
rising up with mind in mind

in a whirlpool more or less
animated...coalesced
for a moment then dispersed
in molecules of rhyming verse
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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