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Call to Heaven
Ring ring
Ring ring
Ring ring
Goddamit
Pick it up
I've been
listening
faithfully
to every
message
on earth's
answering
machine
I never
bothered
to return
your calls
because
earthlings
are used
to being
very small
Sooooo....
Ring ring
Ring ring
Ring ring
Finally I'm
answering
for everything
in my machine
Ring ring
Ring ring
Ring ring
(Fades)
Ring ring
Ring ring
Goddamit
Pick it up
I've been
listening
faithfully
to every
message
on earth's
answering
machine
I never
bothered
to return
your calls
because
earthlings
are used
to being
very small
Sooooo....
Ring ring
Ring ring
Ring ring
Finally I'm
answering
for everything
in my machine
Ring ring
Ring ring
Ring ring
(Fades)
Published 21st Feb 2020
| Edited 22nd Feb 2020
Author's Note
I'm sorry... nothing i do completely satisfies me, artistically. Hopefully that is good news? I plan to keep putting out better and better material.
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21st Feb 2020 8:58pm
Have you ever seen or heard of a site called Exploding Dog? Anyway, he's this artist who renders drawings from requests.
http://www.explodingdog.com/title/godsay.html
This poem reminded me of his profound simplicity!
http://www.explodingdog.com/title/godsay.html
This poem reminded me of his profound simplicity!
21st Feb 2020 9:08pm
So cool! Thanks for the link. I love stuff like that!💖
Did you see my fresh lyric vid!? I'm pumped about it. "Love revolution "
Did you see my fresh lyric vid!? I'm pumped about it. "Love revolution "
21st Feb 2020 10:11pm
22nd Feb 2020 00:04am
21st Feb 2020 10:33pm
Great poem I wish I could have picked up your call. LOL keep on preaching.
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