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ONLINE DATING
Dating has changed so much since I was out there
This ONLINE DATING is our present
And our future
Instead of people getting to know the you within
The are ready to conquer you
When can we meet?
Let’s exchange phone numbers
You beautiful
You are my baby
I love you
In my mind,
I ask
Do you even know who you are wanting to meet?
What’s their mental state
Is he/she a murderer or serial killer?
What diseases he/ she may be infected with?
None of these questions you dare ask
The only thing on your mind is to conquer that ass
At least back in the day you could tell if he/she should
Go
Or
Stay
When you met face to face
By circumstance
With this ONLINE DATING it’s all a
Mystery
One that I don’t have time for
DELETE
This ONLINE DATING is our present
And our future
Instead of people getting to know the you within
The are ready to conquer you
When can we meet?
Let’s exchange phone numbers
You beautiful
You are my baby
I love you
In my mind,
I ask
Do you even know who you are wanting to meet?
What’s their mental state
Is he/she a murderer or serial killer?
What diseases he/ she may be infected with?
None of these questions you dare ask
The only thing on your mind is to conquer that ass
At least back in the day you could tell if he/she should
Go
Or
Stay
When you met face to face
By circumstance
With this ONLINE DATING it’s all a
Mystery
One that I don’t have time for
DELETE
Author's Note
Because I am against ONLINE DATING (My Choice), I decided to do an experiment to validate MY CHOICE. My experiment proved what I thought was right for me is correct. I will chose to go the traditional route. Didn't make it past the first message from those that contacted me knowing that they weren't me wasting my time.
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Re. ONLINE DATING
20th Feb 2020 3:12pm
today dating can be a mystery.
you sure do run a lot of experiments...ha.
look forward to more of them.
thanks for sharing
you sure do run a lot of experiments...ha.
look forward to more of them.
thanks for sharing
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20th Feb 2020 5:26pm
mysticstones, how else will I find out about things that interest me?????? lol
Thanks for the read
Thanks for the read
Re. ONLINE DATING
20th Feb 2020 3:48pm
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20th Feb 2020 5:29pm
Danny11714, you are so correct. They start talking about sex before they even meet you. Which lead me to the decision to cancel my subscription and delete. Back to the drawing board...….
Re. ONLINE DATING
20th Feb 2020 8:01pm
Straight to the point nice short and sweet I love your creativity I love the way you think and something that is simple as Online Dating you spoke so much truth in this poem great job overall
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Re: Re. ONLINE DATING
20th Feb 2020 8:11pm
Malcom, I am always straight to the point. I have been told that's one of my flaws. Thanks for the read. I am glad you like my honesty.
Re: Re. ONLINE DATING
20th Feb 2020 8:25pm
I love honesty and being straightforward with a person it makes everything flow better knowing both of yall on the same page and stuff
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Re. ONLINE DATING
21st Feb 2020 7:55am
They say the eyes are the windows to the soul which for me as a songwriter and poet is so true. Online there are no windows, no smiles or a laugh. I would choose the real thing over the palm sisters anytime lol. Real life is inspiration.
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21st Feb 2020 1:52pm
Re. ONLINE DATING
21st Feb 2020 12:44pm
this speaks volumes of real life truth on so many levels about online dating it use to be a time when you meet face to face and got too know one another through real live conversations and the questions you mention right on point nicely composed...respect dear poetess
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