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Christsong
( after Stevie Smith )
I was taught
he is the weightless son
from eternal death.
But then
out from under
brick and mortar dogma,
that says
what they claim
are Christ’s words.
Hear him—
not only on the wing,
but everywhere air is lifted,
for wind of storm is breath,
and rushing water from a stream.
Is this the way—
where he is distant,
all in the mind, remote,
no longer physical?
So he is risen above—
passing through,
watching me
down below
hearing, uplifted?
The Christ I hear is the one
who has his hands open,
showing where a nail
has not pierced his flesh.
Those who know
how others made it up—
that in the air he is not dead
still as he died for us.
And even how, with every
commercial gift shop
figurine of Jesus
(which still sells cheap),
shows on each face
that even the plaster one
wistfully hopes
simply to be heard.
I was taught
he is the weightless son
from eternal death.
But then
out from under
brick and mortar dogma,
that says
what they claim
are Christ’s words.
Hear him—
not only on the wing,
but everywhere air is lifted,
for wind of storm is breath,
and rushing water from a stream.
Is this the way—
where he is distant,
all in the mind, remote,
no longer physical?
So he is risen above—
passing through,
watching me
down below
hearing, uplifted?
The Christ I hear is the one
who has his hands open,
showing where a nail
has not pierced his flesh.
Those who know
how others made it up—
that in the air he is not dead
still as he died for us.
And even how, with every
commercial gift shop
figurine of Jesus
(which still sells cheap),
shows on each face
that even the plaster one
wistfully hopes
simply to be heard.
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