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The Unveiling
How hidden are that selfish, we
make up cover, for necessity
not just for modesty those blinds
the blemishes we try to hide
Is that enhancement never streaked
the drapes, to hide a shine unique
does the mirror see a cheat
that veneer drawn, hide the dark beneath
make up cover, for necessity
not just for modesty those blinds
the blemishes we try to hide
Is that enhancement never streaked
the drapes, to hide a shine unique
does the mirror see a cheat
that veneer drawn, hide the dark beneath
Published 17th Feb 2020
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17th Feb 2020 12:53pm
Hi, Slip! I RL'd this last night without a chance to comment, so I'll catch up on that now:
Watch your spelling!
necessity* / enhancement*
I am really impressed with your recent offerings, slip. Your poetry is beginning to take a classic style in language and form.
Watch your spelling!
necessity* / enhancement*
I am really impressed with your recent offerings, slip. Your poetry is beginning to take a classic style in language and form.
17th Feb 2020 6:39pm
the two corrections made I am trying with the punctuation it seems concentrating to the detriment of other area`s
