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Distilled and diminished I'm trying to replenish the realism that always seems to be conflicted with criticism by fools seems to me like they got the noose around their neck ready to jump off the deck onto the next trend, bound to fall hard maybe even break a few bones cuz in reality words are harder than stones causing pretty deep incisions leading to questionable decisions, its just an opinion can't hide who u truly are lost and confused like the many ain't to prideful to admit that life is sometimes scary, a four letter word thats lost its meaning replaced by a pretty good feeling,  knowing it all works out no need to doubt feelin uve had enough ready to shout Fuck it all seems like ur back is up against the wall get up off it and walk this way the path of the lost one day you will find ur cause life works in mysterious ways the bad comes before the good this is just a phase walk at your own pace were all gonna meet up at the same place
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