Quietly Yours

Oh this is really good
Graceful in read
Enjoyed

I love the peace in
the arms after all is done
and murmuring stills

Lovely. Sweet spill.

Thx for your sweet comment

NIce vocabulary!

I hope the meaning was still there

Fine erotica, SweetOblivion, and very romantic.  Enjoyed this thoroughly.  

I was reading some Wordsworth earlier today - a preface in which he wrote some ponderous thoughts - what say you <<my additions in quotes>>:  the poetry of ideas may be the spontaneous overflow of powerful <<even lustful forbidden>>  feelings: And also that each idea may take its origin in the emotions dreamed up and then recollected in a tranquil time <<after love>>.

I was wondering does the lust linger while the quiet slowly evaporates? Does it leave slow breathing and sleep, until  needs gradually resurface in the mind? And until the need to exist in the hardness of his demands for filling his princess?

The warmth of loving arms so sweet and beautifully form just to hold you all night long nicely done poetess...respect

Both gently erotic and beautifully romantic. You take the readers on a journey into a quiet moment between lovers in the cusp of erotic grace.

XoXoXo
John

the cusp of truly
undeniable, whispered
urgency to push
our existence and
risk both burning hearts and our
spirits in full lives.