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Tied Down
Is it enough, is it ever enough?
Soft bristled paint brushes
swirled about in a Van Gogh'd vision,
a strawberry sensation of love
strewn about her canvas
where I lie
in the vast of her bosom
running my fingers through her hair
naked we become one
in collaboration
of life and of love
a pure union of soul
where eagles scream
and egos let go
rejoiced in heavenly bliss
as I slowly and steadily
enter into the canals of fate
a path that leads to richness,
adventure, fulfillment
of dreams, fantasies, living
tie me down with soft ropes
explore every inch of this body
in your native tongue
honey drips
falling onto the the pages
tip to tip
petal to stamen
stung
beautiful blue green opulence
understood
the shadow of the moon
kissing
closing of the eyes
vowing
grasping
an outstretched hand
Soft bristled paint brushes
swirled about in a Van Gogh'd vision,
a strawberry sensation of love
strewn about her canvas
where I lie
in the vast of her bosom
running my fingers through her hair
naked we become one
in collaboration
of life and of love
a pure union of soul
where eagles scream
and egos let go
rejoiced in heavenly bliss
as I slowly and steadily
enter into the canals of fate
a path that leads to richness,
adventure, fulfillment
of dreams, fantasies, living
tie me down with soft ropes
explore every inch of this body
in your native tongue
honey drips
falling onto the the pages
tip to tip
petal to stamen
stung
beautiful blue green opulence
understood
the shadow of the moon
kissing
closing of the eyes
vowing
grasping
an outstretched hand
Published 4th Feb 2020
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4th Feb 2020 3:27pm
i once tried using silken ropes. Doesn't work very good as the silkiness causes the knots to come undone seemingly by themselves.
Exquisite spill, here Brother
with sensual metaphors -- My favorite lines:
" naked we become one
in collaboration
of life and of love "
Exquisite spill, here Brother
with sensual metaphors -- My favorite lines:
" naked we become one
in collaboration
of life and of love "
4th Feb 2020 10:57pm
Elegant eroticism, beautifully conveyed. Tied down but that doesn't stop you from coming up with a gem.
5th Feb 2020 11:07pm
A union of the soul is a beautiful thing to behold !
A gorgeous write... 🌻
A gorgeous write... 🌻
7th Feb 2020 3:46pm
i must agree with, tallen... jute or hemp for bondage.. holds a knot or a hitch very well and leaves behind beautiful marks too
also, the poem is amazing 🖤
also, the poem is amazing 🖤
