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This is amazing hard to understand because of the way it is but such finite detail. Great work. I can't even imagine being able to collect all my thoughts that compactly so well done.

Hey, Jordan

Thanks for visiting my page and taking the time to share your observations.  You obviously appreciate the visual aspects of the presentation in addition to your search for the message of the words.

To start to unravel the poem, you could read from the small ends to the centre to detect the rhyming pairs (every opposite word rhymes with its counterpart).  Next, you could note the pattern of the syllable count per line with its opposing line (the syllable count goes incrementally from 1 to 8 and then from 8 to 1).

These are the physical/structural features.  Once you can see the patterns, you could then start to search for meaning and intent

Hope this helps.

Sincerely

cab

Thanks I'll give it a try.

I think it was meant to be about going against the normal as well as god. We ask for forgiveness when we ourselves haven't shown the ability to change. This can translate to about anyone you know. Sometimes we become selfish and yet ask to be loved.

Wonderful!
You see where the message wants to go.

The storyline is based on the Biblical account of how sin entered the world.  You may read this in Genesis 3:1-13.

Correct:  the message can translate to all peoples and times because it comes down to social and spiritual justice, which requires us to love God and to love others as we love ourselves.

Thanks for the RL addition.

Sincerely

cab

Of course. I enjoyed it and I feel by explaining what it meant to me it opens up a whole new perspective.

i think You could start making 18" x 24" Posters !!
Could be Your hobby that makes $$

Another gorgeous structured spill
with spilled meaning

Thanks for the idea Tallen; perhaps it is a prophetic thought!  
 
Little would you know that I've sent a sample of my picture poems to a Jamaican friend who lives in New York.  I've asked her to check out the market for canvas prints, because I envision taking orders for 16x20 or larger prints rendered with or without framing.  
 
Orders that come to me would be sent directly to the printers, who would then send the finished product to the client.  All I have to do is go to the printer's site, upload my image, set the parameters and submit the order.  
 
If you are interested in giving me any pointers or sense of direction or caution here, please visit:  
 
https://www.easycanvasprints.com/singlecanvasdesigner/?pcode=57596E4E53324A6B346C5552503776593666377378392F4A357A71696B394B35&utm_source=bing&utm_term=easy%20canvas%20prints&utm_campaign=Branded+Exact&utm_medium=cpc&msclkid=027178c7ef701ab3b44926fcf683f4ec&utm_content=Branded%20Exact#/start  
 
Thanks for the kind words on structure and meaning.  
 
Sincerely  
 
cab

While i work as a Customer Service Rep in North Scottsdale, AZ, i handled many accounts (Mayo Clinic was my largest) and helped grow other medium accounts, as well as, help up and coming clients -- many who were artists.

i will check out the link and get back to You.
(an ex of mine employed the Printshop i worked at by my encouragement.  I think many an artist have no idea what is available to them.