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The Loner
Scared and alone
he plunged into darkness
without a word
he vanished
from his life
until his black soul
found full of regret
he plunged into darkness
without a word
he vanished
from his life
until his black soul
found full of regret
Published 29th Jan 2020
Author's Note
A person in my family who escape his problems but did not want help
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29th Jan 2020 9:28pm
Sometimes people feel they can solve their problems on their own and don't want to be a burden on others. Regardless of the case u should still be there for the person no matter what. This is truly a sad poem and sometimes loneliness gets the worst of people and we must overcome it. Press on✊🏽✊🏽
30th Jan 2020 3:10am
Thank you for the response. You should always be there for your love ones.
Anonymous
4th Mar 2020 1:09pm
A sad read and one I can empathise with, having had a member of my own family feel too proud to ask for help. In the end it did no good for them either. This was a powerful short
5th Mar 2020 7:34am
10th Jun 2023 10:52am
Your words resonated with me.
Sending you a hug and a beam of light from the darkness.
A brave write.
Sending you a hug and a beam of light from the darkness.
A brave write.
10th Jun 2023 9:47pm
