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Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
29th Jan 2020 12:29pm
Anxieties can be hard to overcome
Keep fighting for those happy thoughts
👌✊✊
Keep fighting for those happy thoughts
👌✊✊
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Re: Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
26th Mar 2020 9:32am
the vast majority of these times is happiness exemplified - thank you - the doubts seem evanescent
Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
29th Jan 2020 12:41pm
Never give up on finding the right love for you are worthy of that kind of love and honor and devotion and respect...respect
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Re: Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
26th Mar 2020 9:32am
Re: Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
26th Mar 2020 10:00am
So wear that CROWN for you earned it out right never settle for less than what you deserve as you know your self value and self worth for anything less it's time to walk away...respect dear poetess
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Re: Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
26th Mar 2020 10:47am
Re: Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
26th Mar 2020 11:10am
Yeah I know what you mean but yet nothing last forever even thorns from a dead rose dries up after awhile and become weak and breakable don't be so hard on yourself poetess that what we truly seek is looking for you as well keep your head up QUEEN...respect dear poetess
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Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
29th Jan 2020 12:50pm
Isn't that nervousness all part of the draw? Seems to contain all the required ingredients for a proper feeding.
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Re: Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
26th Mar 2020 9:33am
Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
13th Mar 2020 8:33pm
The pre-scene anxiety is played out here to perfection. You bring this home to my manhood with florid delight. Love the building sense of what is to come.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. Chequered (Sonnet)
26th Mar 2020 9:34am
perhaps the protection and reassurance leads to arousal and excitement and the control sought?