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Re. In Every Sense
28th Jan 2020 2:27pm
The savoring of anticipation at times can over shadow the sexual act, to us kinda like watching your favorite ice cream melt simply to slurp it, eat it off of you fingers, and lick it off of your chin. Tight piece
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28th Jan 2020 2:41pm
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28th Jan 2020 2:56pm
to some it is about perfect, and most would think that there is a lot of precision in this form of sex. There can be but the anticipation can force you off of a planned route. This allows for some disorderliness
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Re: Re. In Every Sense
28th Jan 2020 2:59pm
it's a kind of deconstructed sonnet; but I wanted to keep the stresses and rhyme scheme right to help the flow, even when the sonnet structure is broken.
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28th Jan 2020 3:01pm
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28th Jan 2020 2:29pm
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28th Jan 2020 2:42pm
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28th Jan 2020 2:57pm
Re. In Every Sense
28th Jan 2020 2:35pm
Oh this is delicious ... can I be ... next ... splendid write my dear poetess ...
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Re: Re. In Every Sense
28th Jan 2020 2:44pm
Re. In Every Sense
28th Jan 2020 3:01pm
A very enjoyable and beautiful invitation well spoken dear poetess...respect
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Re: Re. In Every Sense
28th Mar 2020 9:20am
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28th Mar 2020 11:12am
Re. In Every Sense
28th Jan 2020 3:43pm
This powerful line caught me most: "because you know I will accommodate you deep in my exposure.". Elevates the anticipation just a tad more. Wait until that door swings open.
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28th Mar 2020 9:21am
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28th Jan 2020 9:18pm
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28th Jan 2020 9:41pm
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28th Mar 2020 9:22am
Re. In Every Sense
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2020 11:45pm
Patience has never been one of my better points - my lack there of always gets me into ‘trouble’ 😏
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. In Every Sense
28th Mar 2020 9:23am
Re. In Every Sense
13th Mar 2020 8:30pm
You are the queen of setting scenes. I love the cliff hanger here that surely is a presage to the delights at hand.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. In Every Sense
28th Mar 2020 9:24am