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-loosen the knot (Shamieka)
loosen the knot
let it fold, let it bend
like a finger on the mend
pulling a trigger
on the almost dead
inside this twist of fate
the knot untethered
belongs to the nether
for it takes two to believe
in a bird void of feather
but I will always love her...
-ed
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 23rd Jan 2020
| Edited 24th Jan 2020
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Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
24th Jan 2020 00:31am
what do I know, but I think
you should cut the rope yourself, mate.
although perhaps I'm wrong,
since you cut one rope and you end up
with two ..
you should cut the rope yourself, mate.
although perhaps I'm wrong,
since you cut one rope and you end up
with two ..
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Re: Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
24th Jan 2020 3:11am
Always wise and insightful, my friend.... Thanks, I needed to hear that...
Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
24th Jan 2020 3:17am
This was really heartfelt... I also like your creative analogy of loosening the knot... This is touching, and bittersweet, man! I loved it! ❤️
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Re: Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
24th Jan 2020 3:36am
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24th Jan 2020 9:54am
Re: Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
24th Jan 2020 5:31pm
Re: Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
25th Jan 2020 3:11am
Haha, my bad, brother. I saw this:
"Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
DiscipleofLife (Fenom)"
The DiscipleofLife part was right under that lol
"Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
DiscipleofLife (Fenom)"
The DiscipleofLife part was right under that lol
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Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
24th Jan 2020 10:33am
Biting stuff DL
It's good to see You again-The strength of Wit and depth of emotion...Deadly Greatness!!!
It's good to see You again-The strength of Wit and depth of emotion...Deadly Greatness!!!
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Re: Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
24th Jan 2020 5:31pm
Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
24th Jan 2020 5:36pm
It's very nice to see you back, Fenom. Though I am sorry with such sad and heartfelt poetry. Sometimes loosing the knot enables us to relax and view things at great distances which can only make us wise.
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Re: Re. -loosen the knot (Shamieka)
24th Jan 2020 7:52pm