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put you on a canvas
if I could put you on a canvas
i’d paint you in soft brush strokes
how your hair always falls in your eyes
when you laugh at my stupid jokes
i’d line your eyes as they sparkle
and accentuate the blues and greens
i’d try to capture how they always light up
when you talk about your dreams
if I could put you on a canvas
my lines and corners would be seamless
like waves crashing down on the shore
its harmony has left me speechless
and if just one picture holds a thousand words
just one stroke of you would hold ten thousand
strokes that make the music we sing songs to
and the kind that will tell tales of a legend
if I could put you on a canvas
that’s only a moment of time we would see
nobody would know your heart and soul
just by looking upon this masterpiece
they wouldn’t see the times I hold dear
all those moments when you made me melt
they won’t be able to see these emotions
nor all of the beautiful things that I have felt
if I could put you on canvas
i’d only be doing the world a favor
a heart like gold and a love like yours
it’s something that I intend to savor
when all the strokes are set in place
and I feel your essence has been honored
i’ll hang it at the center of my world
so that I may always gaze at you in wonder
i’d paint you in soft brush strokes
how your hair always falls in your eyes
when you laugh at my stupid jokes
i’d line your eyes as they sparkle
and accentuate the blues and greens
i’d try to capture how they always light up
when you talk about your dreams
if I could put you on a canvas
my lines and corners would be seamless
like waves crashing down on the shore
its harmony has left me speechless
and if just one picture holds a thousand words
just one stroke of you would hold ten thousand
strokes that make the music we sing songs to
and the kind that will tell tales of a legend
if I could put you on a canvas
that’s only a moment of time we would see
nobody would know your heart and soul
just by looking upon this masterpiece
they wouldn’t see the times I hold dear
all those moments when you made me melt
they won’t be able to see these emotions
nor all of the beautiful things that I have felt
if I could put you on canvas
i’d only be doing the world a favor
a heart like gold and a love like yours
it’s something that I intend to savor
when all the strokes are set in place
and I feel your essence has been honored
i’ll hang it at the center of my world
so that I may always gaze at you in wonder
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Re. put you on a canvas
23rd Jan 2020 7:46am
To process or whatever you need to do, this is a lovely write :)
These feelings are rare and even more rare to be able to hold onto.
There is a strong feeling of the adoration of one in this poem that if one feels, they should consider themselves lucky to have encountered it, or if on the other side of the spill, to have been lucky enough to be adored in such a manner.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem
These feelings are rare and even more rare to be able to hold onto.
There is a strong feeling of the adoration of one in this poem that if one feels, they should consider themselves lucky to have encountered it, or if on the other side of the spill, to have been lucky enough to be adored in such a manner.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem
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23rd Jan 2020 9:32am
i've missed Your wonderful (sounding) ink
welcome back, Beautiful
Love the feel and flow to and fro in this romantic spill
welcome back, Beautiful
Love the feel and flow to and fro in this romantic spill
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Re: Re. put you on a canvas
23rd Jan 2020 2:39pm
Ahh, I’ve certainly missed all of you! I’m so glad, even more so now, that I decided to jump back in. Thank you for the read and kind words, as always, Tallen💕
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23rd Jan 2020 11:21am
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23rd Jan 2020 3:05pm
Such a gorgeous painting, Liv! This is such a beautiful, romantic, and sweet poem :)
I truly enjoyed this lovely piece,
-NewB
I truly enjoyed this lovely piece,
-NewB
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Re: Re. put you on a canvas
23rd Jan 2020 3:50pm
Oh thank you, NewB! I’m so happy to have this piece received so well after my extended hiatus from writing! Thanks so much for the read and the kind words💕
Re: Re. put you on a canvas
23rd Jan 2020 10:14pm
Sometimes you have to sit on a lump of coal until it turns into a diamond. It seems like when I take a hiatus, I come back stronger. Something about the pent up emotions and creativity really gets those poetic juices flowing 😊
Keep up the great writing, Liv! ❤️
Keep up the great writing, Liv! ❤️
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Re. put you on a canvas
24th Jan 2020 00:00am
Great poem. It had a really lovely feel to it from start to finish. Really well done.
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5th Sep 2023 4:29pm
ahh, as i find the words to write years later haha, i needed that. much appreciated, luv❤️ thank you for the read & comment!