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I fell down
the gut of my
heart burning
the taste of
spite in my
words
moonlight lies
across my
bed utterly
defeated
love
sucks
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Re. I fell down
22nd Jan 2020 9:55pm
You said it! ❤️👏
(We were all thinking it, anyway...)
Hugs for you,
🌹EdibleWords
(We were all thinking it, anyway...)
Hugs for you,
🌹EdibleWords
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Re: Re. I fell down
23rd Jan 2020 00:18am
Re: Re. I fell down
23rd Jan 2020 00:31am
I don't want to
make you wait
for my next
official poem entry
So dis happens
right here and now
not in six hours...
Relationships climax
like good, dirty sex
It's never gonna be
right up where you
like it be
But hang in there
it will return
for patience
honor the timing
Love is bothersome
Exciting
distracting
and just when you
have heaven
...back t'ya earth again
make you wait
for my next
official poem entry
So dis happens
right here and now
not in six hours...
Relationships climax
like good, dirty sex
It's never gonna be
right up where you
like it be
But hang in there
it will return
for patience
honor the timing
Love is bothersome
Exciting
distracting
and just when you
have heaven
...back t'ya earth again
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Re: Re. I fell down
23rd Jan 2020 00:36am
Re. I fell down
22nd Jan 2020 10:54pm
Damned hormones...
just love to screw with us
Loki must be... the God of
hormonal depravity.
just love to screw with us
Loki must be... the God of
hormonal depravity.
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Re: Re. I fell down
23rd Jan 2020 00:18am
Re. I fell down
22nd Jan 2020 11:07pm
Re: Re. I fell down
23rd Jan 2020 00:22am
Love has never quite worked out for me. I'm better off by myself, but bless those who have made it work.
cheers,
buddhakitty.
cheers,
buddhakitty.
Re. I fell down
23rd Jan 2020 3:21am
Never give up ..but stop looking...
it prefers to sneak up on you...and hates
being ignored...h4u Ely
it prefers to sneak up on you...and hates
being ignored...h4u Ely
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Re. I fell down
23rd Jan 2020 5:38am
Dear BK,
This piece literally has a pulse. The palpable heartbeat of this work is so refined, you’ve written a brilliant description of disappointment in the love life department. How many wishes upon the first star ended for me with “ moonlight lies
across my
bed utterly
defeated “
Moonbeam hugs and stargazer Vera kisses! H🌷
This piece literally has a pulse. The palpable heartbeat of this work is so refined, you’ve written a brilliant description of disappointment in the love life department. How many wishes upon the first star ended for me with “ moonlight lies
across my
bed utterly
defeated “
Moonbeam hugs and stargazer Vera kisses! H🌷
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Re: Re. I fell down
23rd Jan 2020 11:02am
Re. I fell down
23rd Jan 2020 11:39pm
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24th Jan 2020 00:14am