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Fate
In the crook of my neck
I feel your caresses
gentle
strokes of a journey
bathed in brilliance
comendeering the angels
but much prettier
suppressed my senses come to life
dancing to the music of love
lifting out of the breeze
and her tease
her taste
a habit worth holding on to
none the richer
I am poor
as your wealth enters my door
the key has been passed
as tongues swirl
with warm words
spilled in more than whispers
our world watches
time stops as has my heart
it's 333
I feel your caresses
gentle
strokes of a journey
bathed in brilliance
comendeering the angels
but much prettier
suppressed my senses come to life
dancing to the music of love
lifting out of the breeze
and her tease
her taste
a habit worth holding on to
none the richer
I am poor
as your wealth enters my door
the key has been passed
as tongues swirl
with warm words
spilled in more than whispers
our world watches
time stops as has my heart
it's 333
Published 21st Jan 2020
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It's 3333 .( But don't expect them to be couth enough to pick u up). They expect you to go through a maze first like a fuckin mouse
21st Jan 2020 3:53am
Fate, is a beautiful thing, once is dawns !
Whether you believe it or not, you’re overflowing with powerful energy to acknowledge your inner truths.
Peace be unto you ~ 🌻
Whether you believe it or not, you’re overflowing with powerful energy to acknowledge your inner truths.
Peace be unto you ~ 🌻
21st Jan 2020 8:27pm
that opening line ov yours is just gorgeous... how that particular spot is both sensual and a source ov comfort... the rest ov the poem doesn't disappoint either, so many beautiful lines, each packed with such tender imagery.
a wonderful read
a wonderful read
