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Cigarettes
Light one your fine
Two your just passin time
Three baby your on thin ice
Four won't tell ya twice
Five your goin to hell
Six and no one can tell
Seven and I'm lightin up
Eight baby you can't get enough
Nine it's almost time
Ten when they ask I'm just fine
Two your just passin time
Three baby your on thin ice
Four won't tell ya twice
Five your goin to hell
Six and no one can tell
Seven and I'm lightin up
Eight baby you can't get enough
Nine it's almost time
Ten when they ask I'm just fine
Published 3rd Jan 2012
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3rd Jan 2012 12:15pm
You should really avoid number poems. If you like numbers it could be a good slam poem if you developed the lines a little more
