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Darkness inducing senses
Watching silently
Twisting pulling slaps
Edging teasing binding tight
Controlling release
Tapping biting gags
Demanding sweet surrender
Owning marking skin
Stinging burning crops
Intensifying pressure
Breaths taken away
Shaking trembling weak
Holding caressing safe
Soft whispers loved proud
Darkness inducing senses
Watching silently
Twisting pulling slaps
Edging teasing binding tight
Controlling release
Tapping biting gags
Demanding sweet surrender
Owning marking skin
Stinging burning crops
Intensifying pressure
Breaths taken away
Shaking trembling weak
Holding caressing safe
Soft whispers loved proud
Published 20th Jan 2020
Author's Note
A little play with senryu that lead to a write with senryu verses
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21st Jan 2020 8:18am
I love this write tea cup
I am actually thinking about doing this, but instead am leaking them out one at a time :)
"Holding caressing safe
Soft whispers loved proud"
This, the most important part of everything written, and the part that is so easily left behind by selfish people either pretending or faking what they are.
I am actually thinking about doing this, but instead am leaking them out one at a time :)
"Holding caressing safe
Soft whispers loved proud"
This, the most important part of everything written, and the part that is so easily left behind by selfish people either pretending or faking what they are.
