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Senryu
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Surprise! A puzzle
has been given to you as
a birthday present.
Written by
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
Published
20th Jan 2020
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#identity
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Chingillas
20th Jan 2020 4:42am
I always enjoy a poem that plays a role that is not expected. Great work.
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
- Edited 20th Jan 2020 4:49am
20th Jan 2020 4:48am
Thank you! Nice to meet you Chingillas.
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Chingillas
20th Jan 2020 4:52am
Likewise, I have a poem that plays the role of birds I will be posting soon if you want to check that out.
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
20th Jan 2020 3:11pm
I will
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Ahavati
(Tams)
20th Jan 2020 10:47pm
Now piece it together! Intriguingly clever, Kumar.
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Eerie
21st Jan 2020 1:55am
I love this clever little piece. Your senryu has always been a favorite of mine :)
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