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THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
"There's something in the attic,"
"What could it be?"
I hear scratching,
And it's really scaring me...
"There's something in the attic,"
"What could it be?"
I'm by myself,
The it, I don't want to hear or see...
"There's something in the attic,"
"What could it be?"
I hear walking,
Is it stuck and wants to be Free?...
"There's something in the attic",
"What could it be?"
Is it an animal a raccoon, opossum, rat or...
Maybe.....
Maybe.....
Maybe.....
"There's something in the attic,"
"What could it be?"
"Wait the sounds stopped!???
That is strange, it was loud and now lucidity...
"There was something in the attic,"
It's now a mystery...
"No, it wasn't a figment or a dream?"...
"Was it a ghost?"
Looking..........
searching............
Wailing.............
Lurking............
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FOR NANCY............
Author by Nancy Rdz LL
November 13th 2017
"What could it be?"
I hear scratching,
And it's really scaring me...
"There's something in the attic,"
"What could it be?"
I'm by myself,
The it, I don't want to hear or see...
"There's something in the attic,"
"What could it be?"
I hear walking,
Is it stuck and wants to be Free?...
"There's something in the attic",
"What could it be?"
Is it an animal a raccoon, opossum, rat or...
Maybe.....
Maybe.....
Maybe.....
"There's something in the attic,"
"What could it be?"
"Wait the sounds stopped!???
That is strange, it was loud and now lucidity...
"There was something in the attic,"
It's now a mystery...
"No, it wasn't a figment or a dream?"...
"Was it a ghost?"
Looking..........
searching............
Wailing.............
Lurking............
......................
......................
FOR NANCY............
Author by Nancy Rdz LL
November 13th 2017
Written by
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
(WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)
Published 18th Jan 2020
Author's Note
THIS IS A REAL POEM STORY I EXPERIENCED AT HOME ALL ALONE IN MORNING AND THE ATTIC I COULD HEAR LOTS SCARY SOUNDS.
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Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 8:13am
Reminds me of edward allan poe. Sounds messing with the mind. Great poem.
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Re: Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 12:57pm
Thank you for liking this poem, i had no choice but to write it since i was very scared lol 😨🙂🤗
Re: Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 3:00pm
Edward Allen Poe was indeed a great writer and love his poetry of the raven as raven are dark and beautiful creepy birds.
I did long back bought from Edward Poes writing takes in the app store and loved it so much. Really worth the 5.00 dollars. I enjoy reading his work. I'll be buying some more in future. His work is fascinating.
Thanks you it means a lot my writings similarize another writer of famous writing.
As with my stories i love writing mostly scary stories and I'm very happy to know my writing i checked to see who i write like and according to the comparison generator I write like is Stephen kings writings. That inspires me to write more, cause his stories are so favorable for me.
I don't try writing like no other great inspiring writer, i just simply write in my form and style but i know my style does similar others out there. I think we all do but it's exciting to know who we do relate when we write.
Thank you for liking my poem hun 🤗❤
I did long back bought from Edward Poes writing takes in the app store and loved it so much. Really worth the 5.00 dollars. I enjoy reading his work. I'll be buying some more in future. His work is fascinating.
Thanks you it means a lot my writings similarize another writer of famous writing.
As with my stories i love writing mostly scary stories and I'm very happy to know my writing i checked to see who i write like and according to the comparison generator I write like is Stephen kings writings. That inspires me to write more, cause his stories are so favorable for me.
I don't try writing like no other great inspiring writer, i just simply write in my form and style but i know my style does similar others out there. I think we all do but it's exciting to know who we do relate when we write.
Thank you for liking my poem hun 🤗❤
Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 2:36pm
they say sometimes its from the other side of the world of the unknown souls that are caught between two worlds nicely written dear poetess...respect
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Re: Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 3:13pm
Yes very true i believe that, idk maybe someone died in attic, it's creepy in my families attic. This house is very old, I'm not the only one that has heard sounds up there. My oldest nephew could hear string foot walking too. He freaked out too!
It's disturbing to hear it but thankfully has calmed for while has, but this has is partially haunted as there's other things experienced as well.
Thanks for liking hun ❤🤗
It's disturbing to hear it but thankfully has calmed for while has, but this has is partially haunted as there's other things experienced as well.
Thanks for liking hun ❤🤗
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18th Jan 2020 9:30pm
Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 2:50pm
Re: Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 3:17pm
Lol no don't say that, I've seen there's been people creepily living secretly in people's attics homes and for long time. Too crazy lol
I feel someone died in this attic and idk i seen ghost in the house mostly child's. So i think a child trapped in this house and it is old this house. I did capture on video a creepy ghost hand clearly on recording. I still wonder about it 😨
Thanks for liking hun ❤🤗
I feel someone died in this attic and idk i seen ghost in the house mostly child's. So i think a child trapped in this house and it is old this house. I did capture on video a creepy ghost hand clearly on recording. I still wonder about it 😨
Thanks for liking hun ❤🤗
Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 5:05pm
https://www.buzzfeednews.com/article/briannasacks/man-arrested-living-attic-above-teen-girl
Don't worry, it's only me. Like the guy in the above article, I'm holed up right above you.😳 By the way, it would be kinda nice if you'd spare me a little food. 🥪🥛
Just put it inside the attic door, please.
Don't worry, it's only me. Like the guy in the above article, I'm holed up right above you.😳 By the way, it would be kinda nice if you'd spare me a little food. 🥪🥛
Just put it inside the attic door, please.
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Re: Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 5:34pm
Oh ok if its you ok, phew.....
I know that rumbling and walking is only you.
Yea sure, I'll give you a sandwich but ran out of boloni and ham so ill get the turtles live worms since they have pure protein and make a delicious sandwich out of them with milk.🐢 😊
I know that rumbling and walking is only you.
Yea sure, I'll give you a sandwich but ran out of boloni and ham so ill get the turtles live worms since they have pure protein and make a delicious sandwich out of them with milk.🐢 😊
Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
18th Jan 2020 10:59pm
So did you find what was in the attic? In all seriousness, way to portray fear in this piece. You did a great job narrating being afraid of something and not knowing what to do. Well done.
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Re: Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
20th Jun 2022 3:47pm
Sorry hun I didn't respond back and completely forgot. Thank you for liking this poem.
I don't know what it is but my daughter told me my dad went up one day up the attic and saw something up there something bad. I took pics up there many random shots and captured a hidden orb with a like man's face and it freaked me out. I think it's a man up in sttic. Cause after that started hearing stomp walking across the ceiling back and forth and even my oldest nephew as an adult got scared and said if I heard it and I said yes yes I heard it lol but thankfully the walking stuff stopped. I know that there's something in the attic and I wonder what it could be? lol
I don't know what it is but my daughter told me my dad went up one day up the attic and saw something up there something bad. I took pics up there many random shots and captured a hidden orb with a like man's face and it freaked me out. I think it's a man up in sttic. Cause after that started hearing stomp walking across the ceiling back and forth and even my oldest nephew as an adult got scared and said if I heard it and I said yes yes I heard it lol but thankfully the walking stuff stopped. I know that there's something in the attic and I wonder what it could be? lol
Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
You build the suspense well in this write. Likely a rat or squirrel however as I can't see how something supposedly dead could produce a noise, lol.
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Re: Re. THERE'S SOMETHING IN THE ATTIC
20th Jun 2022 3:53pm
Well in my house I caught a ghost on video and I posted it on YouTube. Those things are real. Those things make sounds and hear and seen stuff sometimes. I try not letting it get to me but it's hard. Thanks for liking Billy 🙂