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Poetic Person
A friend that inspires
And challenges boundaries
Always willing to listen
And ready to empower
A friend that writes poetry
And critics it quite well
Giving insightful comments
And leaving pondering questions.
But who is this person,
This beautifully poetic person?
Are they man or woman,
Or something in between?
What is their name?
Does it have a meaning?
What is their age?
Are they older than eighteen?
Are they white,
Colored, latino, or Asian?
Do they speak only English?
Or do they know more?
So who is this person
Behind all the words?
Oh, may we never know.
Good luck dear friend
Oh and promise kept.
And challenges boundaries
Always willing to listen
And ready to empower
A friend that writes poetry
And critics it quite well
Giving insightful comments
And leaving pondering questions.
But who is this person,
This beautifully poetic person?
Are they man or woman,
Or something in between?
What is their name?
Does it have a meaning?
What is their age?
Are they older than eighteen?
Are they white,
Colored, latino, or Asian?
Do they speak only English?
Or do they know more?
So who is this person
Behind all the words?
Oh, may we never know.
Good luck dear friend
Oh and promise kept.
Published 2nd Jan 2012
| Edited 24th Oct 2012
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The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2012 11:45am
And that is how poetry in written.
This my dear, is the best write I've read today, and may I say, of your entire catalogue.
Well done!
Thank You.
Al -x-
This my dear, is the best write I've read today, and may I say, of your entire catalogue.
Well done!
Thank You.
Al -x-
4th Jan 2012 5:03am
haha. thank you Al. Though I must admit that I felt pretty insecure putting this one up, because of me not being very good in writing poetry without rhyme. I hope it gave you some good things to ponder over.
Anonymous
4th Jan 2012 5:30am
Well I think you wrote this better.
Your Rhyming stuff doesnt stand close to it, your word choice is better, it flows better and it has a brutal honesty about it.
This is just awsome.
Al -x-
Your Rhyming stuff doesnt stand close to it, your word choice is better, it flows better and it has a brutal honesty about it.
This is just awsome.
Al -x-
8th Jan 2012 4:29am
Thank you for your honesty. I'll try to write another one like this one some time or another, when I get a chance, so that I can try to push my boundaries and make my collection of poems more interesting.
15th Jan 2012 10:05am
This poem really made me think about the correspondence poetry has with the world; thanks for that.
9th Feb 2012 6:39am
9th Feb 2012 11:42pm
