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In The End
In the end there is only dust of a once perfect form.
Molded I was in imperfection!
The spirit within this mold has bleed out
through the cracks of this fractured body.
Sanity lingers in puddles.
Here I'm left hollow.
Screams of insanity echo within.
Maybe now is the time.
The time to let go.
The quality of life just isn't there.
I'm done.
Molded I was in imperfection!
The spirit within this mold has bleed out
through the cracks of this fractured body.
Sanity lingers in puddles.
Here I'm left hollow.
Screams of insanity echo within.
Maybe now is the time.
The time to let go.
The quality of life just isn't there.
I'm done.
Published 5th Jan 2020
Author's Note
Entry from my daily journal.
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6th Jan 2020 3:26am
I've been there
more times than my aging mind can remember........
I'm certain i may return some day
but i hope not
more times than my aging mind can remember........
I'm certain i may return some day
but i hope not
6th Jan 2020 3:32am
Around every corner there is always a ray of light although at times to get to that corner seems an eternity. As I live in the Now I see everyday as a restart a new dawn brings with it a time to be reborn all over again. Your words echo loud in me at times but as the morning begins a shower to wake up and put one leg in the trousers at a time, the baby that screams and gasps for air and life is once again reborn in us. Great write, a reflective write Daniel. Your words betray that you are hollow inside.
Cheers
Cheers
6th Jan 2020 7:41am
Let go... It's hard and almost impossible, friend. Especially with the constant reminder of this worlds failures. I felt your stuggle in this write, nice job gothic!
7th Jan 2020 7:02am
Nice and honest write. You know that you have what it takes to keep going, so keep writing, and keep going..
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