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Strange Attraction
Beneath the wild surf
of numb desolation;
I feel her reaching out
across the abyss.
As the pendulum swings,
like the slow hand of death
into the muffled fret
of obscurity.
I lie awake
in the soft bosom of solitude,
feeling her touch
my distant soul.
Like a naked apparition,
conjuring love
through a prism
of pain.
of numb desolation;
I feel her reaching out
across the abyss.
As the pendulum swings,
like the slow hand of death
into the muffled fret
of obscurity.
I lie awake
in the soft bosom of solitude,
feeling her touch
my distant soul.
Like a naked apparition,
conjuring love
through a prism
of pain.
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4th Jan 2020 12:36pm
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4th Jan 2020 6:12pm
This well woven spill
reminds me of a spill i post a while ago -- my Succubus
& so quite relatable.
reminds me of a spill i post a while ago -- my Succubus
& so quite relatable.
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4th Jan 2020 7:02pm
The poem you wrote is definitely something I can relate to.
Thanks for visiting.
Thanks for visiting.
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6th Jan 2020 1:11pm
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6th Jan 2020 3:35pm
Thanks. I usually write rhymes, but free verse allows me to be more expressive.
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15th Jan 2020 8:53am
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15th Jan 2020 8:59am
Thanks. I really appreciate it. Reminds me that I must write more...but I'm glued to a good book at the moment.
Re. Strange Attraction
18th Jan 2020 8:47pm
Well written. I feel the emotion in the words. We all have that thing we can't forget but we have to find a way to move past it. Life isn't always fair but I keep fighting anyway.
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