While My World Sleeps

sweet passionate thoughts indeed i approve this message dear poetess...respect

I think I prefer softer side verse and leaving others to draw their own conclusions, on the whole

that will work even better as well dear poetess...respect

The reference to certain services leaves just enough mystery to allow the reader's imagination to run wild.  Lovely, suggestive write!

I hope that some of
the suggestive suggestions
were helpful to you

They were.  ;)

I like how understated this is-certain services-it stirs the imagination. Well done.


hugs,
buddhakitty.

glad my spoon served

Sets a readers mind in different directions...and makes the reader want more!  Very good!

diverse minds need diverse diversions

A strong dash of hot sauce for a new recipe bound to make the reader come back for more. I love this new direction for you. You give me a peek into your mystique.

XoXoXo
John