Shattered Soul

Thank you! ^^

Dear P,

Your poem has captured such raw emotion with such brevity. I admire the last line especially and its candor in letting the subject see the willingness you have to offer of yourself with love unconditional. Lovely write.
H🌷

Thank you very much for this :). It was a pure catharsis once it was written.

Sometimes only few words are needed to convey depth of sweetness so beautiful with tender compassion under the guidance of love and belief in its ability to help heal. Short and sweet personified.

Thank you, I find that love language does not require many words :)

lovely senryu

Thank you! ^^ I love the simplicity of this form.

Wow... beautiful senryu. I can sense the desperation...!
Nice writing, lolita :)
Best wishes,
-NewB

Thank you! :))

Haunting tears ... love that ... bravo poetess ...

Thank you :))

Short YET powerful words with strong message!!!!

Thank you! :)