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M a t h
Like a monolith
Meredith sits in
between my legs
between my logs
on the centre of
gravity
universe
motion
Like a herectic
she submerges
It's her throne
my bone
hers alone
Like a thunderstorm
she thrashes
linear time=frozen river
It is
her cone
her hyperbola
her pyramid
with levels
of happiness
albeit
d
e
s
c
e
n
d
i
n
g
she rocks slowly
its her cradle
she moves
up
and
d
o
w
n
It’s her see-saw
She
grinds
grimaces
grins
a n d
goes red
b-r-e-a-t-h-l-e-s-s
then she
dances
slides
coils
cuts
coos
as it is
her pole
her locus
her focus
Meredith is indeed
my meridian
I radiate from her
pores
My Bedo
A moment=a desert
I am your Bedouin
in this sand storm
spectacular
stroboscopic
Her life flows in
spurts
spikes
streams
from inside her
from that cave
which ejects
divinity
death
dreams
we all are made of
and the stars liquefy.
Published 30th Dec 2011
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2011 10:15pm
I realy like this piece Mr Wand6, I love this type of poetry, shaved (you could shave more, if you wanted to) poignant and to the point. Beautiful.
Much enjoyed.
Al .
Much enjoyed.
Al .
30th Dec 2011 10:25pm
Al
Glad you enjoyed.
Oh yes, I have shaved it.
Its morphic, fluid.
It has evolved in the last
few minutes itself and looks
different from its initial
form.
Thank you as ever
Curtsy,
S'
Glad you enjoyed.
Oh yes, I have shaved it.
Its morphic, fluid.
It has evolved in the last
few minutes itself and looks
different from its initial
form.
Thank you as ever
Curtsy,
S'
Anonymous
30th Dec 2011 10:48pm
Yes, I like it shaved .
:)
:)
Anonymous
31st Dec 2011 3:49am
Hey I like it shaved too ;)
Oh ya we are talking about the poem lol
"It's her throne
my bone
hers alone"
and
"I radiate from her pores"
Those were my favorite lines...Great Write :)
Oh ya we are talking about the poem lol
"It's her throne
my bone
hers alone"
and
"I radiate from her pores"
Those were my favorite lines...Great Write :)
31st Dec 2011 5:20pm
Milkyway
Oh yes. Rain forests
don't go too well in
any case. For clean
concretescape has taken
over.:)
Thank you for stopping by
and the kind comment.
Have a sexy new year.
Curtsy,
S'
Oh yes. Rain forests
don't go too well in
any case. For clean
concretescape has taken
over.:)
Thank you for stopping by
and the kind comment.
Have a sexy new year.
Curtsy,
S'
31st Dec 2011 5:23pm
Al
thought you would.
you are responsible
in more than one way.
remember that always.
as you introduced the
concept of revisits.
curtsy,
S'
thought you would.
you are responsible
in more than one way.
remember that always.
as you introduced the
concept of revisits.
curtsy,
S'
31st Dec 2011 2:24am
31st Dec 2011 5:26pm
Anonymous
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31st Dec 2011 5:27pm
31st Dec 2011 9:11am
31st Dec 2011 5:30pm
Anando
Missed you.:)
Thanks for stopping by
and glad you think so.
Curtsy,
S'
Missed you.:)
Thanks for stopping by
and glad you think so.
Curtsy,
S'
1st Jan 2012 2:06am
1st Jan 2012 8:54am
Kym
Thank you for the kindness.
As always.
Glad to have you around.
Curtsy,
S'
Thank you for the kindness.
As always.
Glad to have you around.
Curtsy,
S'
1st Jan 2012 2:15am
I really like the dramatic words, they make for vivid interpretation, deliciously descriptive
1st Jan 2012 8:59am
Dogz
Ah thank you for stopping by.
And speaking your mind.
Much appreciated.
Curtsy,
S'
Ah thank you for stopping by.
And speaking your mind.
Much appreciated.
Curtsy,
S'
1st Jan 2012 7:22pm
it was quite graphic! i loved how you played with the words 'descending' and ' breathless'
well done!!
well done!!
1st Jan 2012 8:49pm
Opheliac
Thank you.
Those two examples you
mentioned actually
happened post I posted
the first draft.
Glad you liked it.
Curtsy,
S'
Thank you.
Those two examples you
mentioned actually
happened post I posted
the first draft.
Glad you liked it.
Curtsy,
S'
