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Unreachable gods
A fool I've been to imagine I could reside in this pantheon
Me a mortal man whose words are less than defecation
Surrounded by Goliaths leaving footsteps I could never fill or follow
Unlike those I dream to become, my words will die with me...
Me a mortal man whose words are less than defecation
Surrounded by Goliaths leaving footsteps I could never fill or follow
Unlike those I dream to become, my words will die with me...
Published 22nd Dec 2019
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22nd Dec 2019 3:56am
22nd Dec 2019 10:37am
Dear P,
Ditto Buddhakitty. Nicely done. I would disagree with you on your last line though, as you’ve just penned some wonderfully powerful thoughts here- I don’t see you dying without leaving your message and imprint in the world. This piece is proof of that.
H🌷
Ditto Buddhakitty. Nicely done. I would disagree with you on your last line though, as you’ve just penned some wonderfully powerful thoughts here- I don’t see you dying without leaving your message and imprint in the world. This piece is proof of that.
H🌷
