Quiet Lies

Saying it as it is
Raw emotions
Oft best to spill on here
I'm guessing it helps lots 👍👌

Self expression can be fun!

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A different side of you here. Love the strong language and what you do with it. Potent message to whomever this is addressed to. Your artfully crafted verse shines here. And that last word, "Tranquillity" was a complete surprise. Giving the reader a surprise is cunning indeed.

XoXoXo
John

Always a surprise at the bottom of the box

WoW...im...im not even sure how to feel about this, such vivid yet emotional detail, this is...amazing and makes me feel ecstatic at the same time. very good work

Glad you enjoyed my fulminations

spoken with raw and uncut emotions from the soul...nicely composed poetess

As you can imagine the emotions were cut, chopped, glued, broken and kicked around to give, I suppose, the appearance of bruised and very raw.  

I find each verse needs a forest of words and meanings to be cut down before my aspirations are sated.

you surrounded it nicely with your flow of thoughts it spoke truth uncut and raw for it is what it is after all the TRUTH DEAR POOETESS...RESPECT

A truth - though how true it is will always be moot

FOSHO POETESS..