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21st Dec 2019 2:14pm
Saying it as it is
Raw emotions
Oft best to spill on here
I'm guessing it helps lots 👍👌
Raw emotions
Oft best to spill on here
I'm guessing it helps lots 👍👌
22nd Dec 2019 12:45pm
22nd Dec 2019 1:25pm
A different side of you here. Love the strong language and what you do with it. Potent message to whomever this is addressed to. Your artfully crafted verse shines here. And that last word, "Tranquillity" was a complete surprise. Giving the reader a surprise is cunning indeed.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
22nd Dec 2019 12:44pm
21st Dec 2019 6:08pm
WoW...im...im not even sure how to feel about this, such vivid yet emotional detail, this is...amazing and makes me feel ecstatic at the same time. very good work
22nd Dec 2019 12:45pm
22nd Dec 2019 1:08pm
22nd Dec 2019 1:39pm
As you can imagine the emotions were cut, chopped, glued, broken and kicked around to give, I suppose, the appearance of bruised and very raw.
I find each verse needs a forest of words and meanings to be cut down before my aspirations are sated.
I find each verse needs a forest of words and meanings to be cut down before my aspirations are sated.
22nd Dec 2019 1:43pm
you surrounded it nicely with your flow of thoughts it spoke truth uncut and raw for it is what it is after all the TRUTH DEAR POOETESS...RESPECT
22nd Dec 2019 1:49pm
22nd Dec 2019 2:59pm
