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Trembling slightly bent over my knee
my hand cracking against her skin
warm, red, stinging, flinching, nerves humming
my hand cracking against her skin
warm, red, stinging, flinching, nerves humming
Published 12th Dec 2019
| Edited 25th May 2020
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12th Dec 2019 3:37pm
I love the form that it is written in. It's a sexual and sensual topic as well. Good job
12th Dec 2019 3:39pm
14th Dec 2019 9:54am
With the right words and rhythm, it doesn't take much to lift hairs on the back of a reader's neck. You wrote the right words to the right rhythm. Well done.
14th Dec 2019 5:08pm
