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One Dollar and a "General"
a smile greets me at the door
a shape that
bellows an exaggeration,
a boastful femininity
sheepishly I glance towards
her light
….a holiday heart, pulsing
wanting to see even more
of this big-hipped sister
poured into those skin-tight jeans
buxom over-spill of breast
from her blouse
tattooed caramel skin
served upon the counter,
“on the house”
…..her southern hospitality
and the taste of peppermint
that forms in my mouth
how my mind recalls that twinkle in her eye.
Moving my way through the store
passing by the “sundries” isle
reaching for a fragrance from the shelves
I turn and there again rose that smile.....
“.....anything I can help you with tonight?”
(wondering if she noticed the three-dimensional
image pressing against my jeans so tight)
oh how her breast resemble
a pair of Hershey's kisses
what a delectable chocolate delight
as my mouth waters
the impression of her strained nipples
against her blouse....the size of
newly minted quarters (Fathers be good to your daughters......)
“no my dear...but thank you for asking”
she says she'll be up front as she walks away
licking those bee stung lips
this beautiful creole queen
watching that ass bounce away
fixated on this tawdry, burlesque
kind-of-scene
the stiff one-eyed serpent
poised and ready to sting
those moist puffy lips betwixt
the thighs of those tight jeans..........
….segue to the register
and she's packing my bags
she reaches her hand
through the shute,
grabs a hold of my big black dagger
and she pulls on it,
a long, slow drag
“Thanks for shopping at Dollar General
hope to see you again”
she sucks on her fingertips
glances my way
flashing
a very sexy grin
I head to my car
passing through the double doors
my eyes glowing in the night
like a bonfire
hot, throbbing, aroused and wanting more......
Damn!
"phuck" a One Dollar
and a General store!!!
Published 11th Dec 2019
Author's Note
.....been a way for a minute dancing with the flu. This is based on a real incident. Can't a brother just get some cold medicine? 😂
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11th Dec 2019 6:13am
Hot memory recalled here. Favourite lines (for suggestiveness):
“.....anything I can help you with tonight?”
(wondering if she noticed the three-dimensional
image pressing against my jeans so tight)
“.....anything I can help you with tonight?”
(wondering if she noticed the three-dimensional
image pressing against my jeans so tight)
11th Dec 2019 12:03pm
Ohh the flu had you melted huh...
The tone feel soft, like you were blushing.... Nah it was ...the flu...
Love to read and glad to have you back around.
The tone feel soft, like you were blushing.... Nah it was ...the flu...
Love to read and glad to have you back around.
27th Dec 2019 9:12pm
