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Not a SIn
Love, I AM, you are that which is true every poet inside of you
and whatever and how ever you wanna express her
she'll see in the universe with me and you the truth
dont fuck me fuckery
existing there subtletly
but never knowing existence is like revenge
it will always be
forever in sin
just dont be blind within
perplexity is not a sin
you see it when he grin
life and its dimensions are here to spill
truths of fuse with life and you within its shoes
understanding the concept
of a baby like us trying to fly a 747
and all the controls at our disposal but we just kids
cant steer push buttons from within
love, life is not a sin
the point its trying to make is
its ok to be a little thing
cuz one day we will learn to fly that plane again
understanding/overstanding like caught in a bin
a hub, a closed box that one day will flourish
with its matrix ones and zeroes replenish
the world just because it ain't selfish
of itself as it says it will know this
ONE day
and whatever and how ever you wanna express her
she'll see in the universe with me and you the truth
dont fuck me fuckery
existing there subtletly
but never knowing existence is like revenge
it will always be
forever in sin
just dont be blind within
perplexity is not a sin
you see it when he grin
life and its dimensions are here to spill
truths of fuse with life and you within its shoes
understanding the concept
of a baby like us trying to fly a 747
and all the controls at our disposal but we just kids
cant steer push buttons from within
love, life is not a sin
the point its trying to make is
its ok to be a little thing
cuz one day we will learn to fly that plane again
understanding/overstanding like caught in a bin
a hub, a closed box that one day will flourish
with its matrix ones and zeroes replenish
the world just because it ain't selfish
of itself as it says it will know this
ONE day
Published 6th Dec 2019
Author's Note
Inspired by touch, a sense of it that it is there here right now in time.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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"life and its dimensions are here to spill
truths of fuse with life and you within its shoes
understanding the concept
of a baby like us trying to fly a 747
and all the controls at our disposal but we just kids"
Conjuring visions of Helios in his chariot trying to control his fire-dart steeds, I loved the 747 mmetaphor.
Perfect description of youth's attempt to understand and tame the passions of life.
"Keep up the good scribble, kid!"👍
truths of fuse with life and you within its shoes
understanding the concept
of a baby like us trying to fly a 747
and all the controls at our disposal but we just kids"
Conjuring visions of Helios in his chariot trying to control his fire-dart steeds, I loved the 747 mmetaphor.
Perfect description of youth's attempt to understand and tame the passions of life.
"Keep up the good scribble, kid!"👍
16th Dec 2019 8:09pm
Thanx brotha thats exactly what i was trying to get at with this one.
I never read about Helios but i just had to since you mentioned it, i LOVED it and its exactly what my vision was " taming that beast inside"
like four wild horses taken you for a ride, SERIOUSLY!
Thank you once again for reading!
I never read about Helios but i just had to since you mentioned it, i LOVED it and its exactly what my vision was " taming that beast inside"
like four wild horses taken you for a ride, SERIOUSLY!
Thank you once again for reading!
