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Grotesque Ghost Gadding
punctured peace puking
afflicted passion pulsing
lousy lust lurching
dainty draws drooling
dark desires dangling
fetish fate fostering
lanky life lusting
sundry saps starving
hoisted hacks hunting
some choose wives
some, salient strife;
twain tamed ties
grotesque ghost gadding
when d.t.s' declining.
19:12:03:14:56
afflicted passion pulsing
lousy lust lurching
dainty draws drooling
dark desires dangling
fetish fate fostering
lanky life lusting
sundry saps starving
hoisted hacks hunting
some choose wives
some, salient strife;
twain tamed ties
grotesque ghost gadding
when d.t.s' declining.
19:12:03:14:56
Published 3rd Dec 2019
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5th Dec 2019 3:00pm
I was reading your beautiful poem handsome one...and forgive me for saying this...but your words ring perfect with the twelve days of Christmas reading it downward.... try it..
5th Dec 2019 3:12pm
5th Dec 2019 3:19pm
12-punctured peace puking
11-afflicted passion pulsing
10-lousy lust lurching
9-dainty draws drooling
8-dark desires dangling
7-fetish fate fostering
6-lanky life lusting
5-sundry saps starving
4-hoisted hacks hunting
3-some choose wives
2-some, salient strife;
twain tamed ties
and
grotesque ghost gadding
when d.t.s' declining.
It reads like the twelve days of Christmas my poet....I'm loving it!
11-afflicted passion pulsing
10-lousy lust lurching
9-dainty draws drooling
8-dark desires dangling
7-fetish fate fostering
6-lanky life lusting
5-sundry saps starving
4-hoisted hacks hunting
3-some choose wives
2-some, salient strife;
twain tamed ties
and
grotesque ghost gadding
when d.t.s' declining.
It reads like the twelve days of Christmas my poet....I'm loving it!
