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Loneliness of the Loving Heart
there is not a shadow of doubt
that my heart is so full
of love for you
why else would I occupy myself
with even the stupidest things
just so time passes
and I get to say 'hi'
before 'good night'
that my heart is so full
of love for you
why else would I occupy myself
with even the stupidest things
just so time passes
and I get to say 'hi'
before 'good night'
Published 3rd Dec 2019
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3rd Dec 2019 11:09am
3rd Dec 2019 2:26pm
This takes the reader to where you are, someone so in love that you'd wait for even a second of time with them. It brings to mind the first realization of attraction, the ' oh my God they're looking my way/they smiled at me ' time frame. Gorgeous.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
3rd Dec 2019 4:33pm
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6th Dec 2019 11:27am
Thank you! That's is the biggest compliment for a brevity writer, I think. It's what I strive for anyways.
Delanee
Delanee
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
3rd Dec 2019 4:33pm
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3rd Dec 2019 10:38pm
6th Dec 2019 11:28am
Thank you very much, Josh. It's not easy, but it feels a lot like taking a picture. It doesn't reveal the whole story either, just a snippet of it.
Delanee
Delanee
