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Worst feeling
Loving him
Pining for him
Getting poo-faced drunk
and still loving him
Loving him
wanting him
Losing him
to another woman
Crying for him
Laying in the gloom
lost in daydream
in a padded room
worst feeling
is just a feeling
inside this body
of a none-entity
Pining for him
Getting poo-faced drunk
and still loving him
Loving him
wanting him
Losing him
to another woman
Crying for him
Laying in the gloom
lost in daydream
in a padded room
worst feeling
is just a feeling
inside this body
of a none-entity
Published 28th Dec 2011
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28th Dec 2011 3:10pm
Anonymous
28th Dec 2011 4:35pm
is the worst feeling! especially when you lose the person who had your heart to someone else ;( this was good Grace
28th Dec 2011 4:55pm
I was stupid that way, milkyway. Thank you for reading and commenting. You are kind.
Anonymous
28th Dec 2011 4:58pm
you were Not stupid...you were in love! If he let it go, he was the Stupid one!!! The read was my pleasure
28th Dec 2011 5:03pm
28th Dec 2011 5:20pm
29th Dec 2011 00:06am
28th Dec 2011 6:04pm
29th Dec 2011 00:07am
28th Dec 2011 6:51pm
I had read during the competition to which I had also participated. I liked a lot and motivated me to write myself. Cause Of worst feelings I have closets full.
Mysterious competition, disappeared into thin air.
Congratulations to the organizer: bad fellings indeed.
Mysterious competition, disappeared into thin air.
Congratulations to the organizer: bad fellings indeed.
29th Dec 2011 00:08am
Oh yes Luca...I just copied it and posted it instead of waiting for that competition result. Thanks for reading and commenting.
5th Jan 2012 7:41am
5th Jan 2012 9:09am
Dear MrAlptraum, thank you for dropping by, reading and leaving a comment. Its very much appreciated.
