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a witty little piece with a nice play on words. Its very simple, but shows alot of creativity and intelligence. It skirts depth without falling into it
2nd Jan 2012 4:20pm
27th Dec 2011 10:15pm
" hold fast to dreams for if go
Life is like a barren field frozen by snow
Hold fast to dreams for if dreams die
Life is like a broken wing bird that can not fly.
Great write and simplicity is the point
Life is like a barren field frozen by snow
Hold fast to dreams for if dreams die
Life is like a broken wing bird that can not fly.
Great write and simplicity is the point
2nd Jan 2012 4:20pm
28th Dec 2011 2:18am
2nd Jan 2012 4:21pm
