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Shut In
this lonely young girl kept them bottle and tight.
keeping them locked away and out of sight.
she knows if she speek they will since her shame,
this give her more reason for herself to blame.
she feels closed in witch she stands by this door.
with standing the names of calling her whore.
this sad young girl keept them bottle at age.
the door of siolence beat with rage.
her unhappy little heart always filed with pain.
threw this protected door shall stay the same.
she fakes this smile apone her face.
never will she expose this place.
she cry every night,while alone in her bed,
where her door is shut.
and locked instead.
this mountin of fear witch came each year,
keept them held for no one to hear.
more and more she will keep them sealed
mantaining her in this battle feild.
she knows if she speek they will since her shame,
this give her more reason for herself to blame.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
keeping them locked away and out of sight.
she knows if she speek they will since her shame,
this give her more reason for herself to blame.
she feels closed in witch she stands by this door.
with standing the names of calling her whore.
this sad young girl keept them bottle at age.
the door of siolence beat with rage.
her unhappy little heart always filed with pain.
threw this protected door shall stay the same.
she fakes this smile apone her face.
never will she expose this place.
she cry every night,while alone in her bed,
where her door is shut.
and locked instead.
this mountin of fear witch came each year,
keept them held for no one to hear.
more and more she will keep them sealed
mantaining her in this battle feild.
she knows if she speek they will since her shame,
this give her more reason for herself to blame.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
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27th Dec 2011 00:46am
This is a lonely poem SSJG I guess the family is not impressed at this time , not good at all message me ok
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:P
27th Dec 2011 1:19am
re: re: :P
30th Dec 2011 9:25pm
hey
27th Dec 2011 1:33am
this is good i like it
good expression on how you
feel i am here if you ever need
to talk ok
ps hugs your way
good expression on how you
feel i am here if you ever need
to talk ok
ps hugs your way
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re: hey
27th Dec 2011 7:27pm
wow
27th Dec 2011 8:02am
its a sad peom my eyes are filling with tears i felt the emotion of deep saddness in every sentence,hey K you know if you ever need to speak to someone theres so many people here that you can
come to Feel better k.
come to Feel better k.
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28th Dec 2011 3:01am
i like how you show the readers how you feel...you are a gifted writer and dont let the others around you make you shut yourself away...i hope life starts treating you better k
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re: ...
28th Dec 2011 3:15am
Lift up your heart
29th Dec 2011 5:51pm
Write about our own sadness is a good remedy to cure loneliness. If this happens through the verses, it can become poetry.
Apparently you have a bunch of friends willing to listen to you in this site. I think it's beautiful.
Never grow weary of improving the way you express yourself.(In english too)
Lift up your heart: you are beautiful, young and intelligent.
Apparently you have a bunch of friends willing to listen to you in this site. I think it's beautiful.
Never grow weary of improving the way you express yourself.(In english too)
Lift up your heart: you are beautiful, young and intelligent.
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re: Lift up your heart
29th Dec 2011 8:59pm
Re: Shut In
29th Nov 2012 7:07pm
You are clearly learning English and I applaud your effort to express yourself in poetry, while still learning a language. That takes guts! I liked the poem very much and think the flow was very good. The imagery came through clearly as well. Nicely done :)
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