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The Hostages
A state of condition
that produces inflammation
dizziness, exhaustion
Mineral loss aggravation
Induced by stress so easily
That's the case for many disabled
Medical Combat veterans
Imagine if their teen children
Or predators knew this fact
Manipulating a situation by
Harming a stress management program
For simple survival
It's a hostage situation
But now the hostages
Are breaking out
While bad men are escalating
Their time to fall
Has almost come
that produces inflammation
dizziness, exhaustion
Mineral loss aggravation
Induced by stress so easily
That's the case for many disabled
Medical Combat veterans
Imagine if their teen children
Or predators knew this fact
Manipulating a situation by
Harming a stress management program
For simple survival
It's a hostage situation
But now the hostages
Are breaking out
While bad men are escalating
Their time to fall
Has almost come
Published 6th Nov 2019
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6th Nov 2019 6:52pm
If your using my name in anything. I prefer it said in layman's terms. Hence why I think this? The name is capitalized.
I should uncapitalize it, then, because I was referencing PPOV.
It's aggravated or induced by mineral loss and blood pressure changes, as I understand it.
One of my writing flaws is random capitalization. I blame my iPad. I should be more careful, really!
It's aggravated or induced by mineral loss and blood pressure changes, as I understand it.
One of my writing flaws is random capitalization. I blame my iPad. I should be more careful, really!
6th Nov 2019 10:01pm
Being in the grip of a medical condition can feel like a hostage held captive by a devious captor that seems to have your every move under their thumb, inflicting discomfort at every turn. Your poem could as easily be related to by sufferers of PSP, MS, MND, Fibromyalgia and other long term conditions..
6th Nov 2019 10:02pm
