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WHEN I LOOK AT YOU I SEE A VICTIM

When I look at you and I see the hurt that he caused you over the years of your lives together for it hurts me to see you cry with those tears deep within your eyes, for he truly doesnt know what kind of woman he has in you for you have a heart that loves from deep inside for you have an intelligence mind that is so full of knowledge and wisdom.                                                                                          
                                                                                                                                       But if only if he just took the time to really have a conversation with you he will see how deep your mind has grown over time even with all that you've been through in life, for you deserve to have a man that will appreciate you for the woman that you have now become due to your struggles that you had to over come in life.                                                                                                    
                                                                                                                                  For as I LOOK AT YOU through my own eyes I see a woman strong with strength that will capture a real mans mind and heart for you know I know, all about the complicatings that he has put you through over the years of your lives together for the walls are so paper thin you can hear a babys cries.                                                                                  
                                                                                                                                      
As he is always accusing you when he was the one out here with creeping and cheating and lying, even to the fights of abuse in the wee hours of the night when he left your eyes bruise with circles around your eyes, that not even makeup can hide and lets not forget about the scars upon your body from punches from his fist coming from left to right.      
                                                                                                                                  For you truly deserve a man that is willing to love you and respect you with honor and respect with uncondition love from the heart and soul, as a woman a mother of his offsprings apart from his seed for you deserve better in your life, for as a woman you werent put here upon earth to be abuse nor neglected as a woman of skin and flesh and blood.
Written by Stoney223 (WOLF BAY33)
Published | Edited 26th Oct 2019
Author's Note
FOR NO WOMAN DESERVES TO BE LOVE IN THIS WAY FOR ITS A WEAK MINDED MAN THAT HAS TO HAVE, THIS KIND OF CONTROL OVER HIS WOMAN TREATING HER WITH NO LOVE NOR HONOR NOR RESPECT...STONEY BAY
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