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Four cabin walls
The walls that hold my fragile mind have cracks and leaks and holes
And sometimes when I’m left alone they start to overflow
It’s not my problem so you see, I didn’t make the walls.
The bastards that constructed me were sleeping on the job!
And sometimes when I’m left alone they start to overflow
It’s not my problem so you see, I didn’t make the walls.
The bastards that constructed me were sleeping on the job!
Published 21st Oct 2019
Author's Note
The title is an old song my mother would sing, it doesn’t really work with the poem but I’m shit at titles obviously
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4th Jan 2020 2:17pm
That last line made me giggle, but it's a serious issue you've addressed here. The cabin is a creative analogy, Introspective little piece, Tom! Liked it :)
