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If Words Should Fail
Accolades from your mouth
move me in and out;
eyes gauging the reaction
a praise defined in traction
Intent to hear me whimper
my senses threatening to splinter;
so pleasant, this detention
to demand my cock's extension
If words fail to portray
you will always have this way
- mapped where chocolate melts;
the appreciation always felt
move me in and out;
eyes gauging the reaction
a praise defined in traction
Intent to hear me whimper
my senses threatening to splinter;
so pleasant, this detention
to demand my cock's extension
If words fail to portray
you will always have this way
- mapped where chocolate melts;
the appreciation always felt
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Re. If Words Should Fail
20th Oct 2019 3:46pm
My A game is off today, so my commentary isn't at its best. That last stanza said it all. The power of words, sweet words, eh?! ;)
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Re: Re. If Words Should Fail
20th Oct 2019 3:58pm
Don't sweat it! Commentary is just fine. You see I've reverted back to my perversions. Better start to the day.
Re: Re. If Words Should Fail
20th Oct 2019 6:03pm
Haha. I think I've mentioned once or twice in regards to you sinning on Sunday. 😉
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20th Oct 2019 7:10pm
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21st Oct 2019 11:25pm
Re. If Words Should Fail
20th Oct 2019 6:38pm
This is such a beautiful whisper my tender poet, I never assumed you had a sweet tooth for chocolate; it does tend to melt in your mouth... leaving the remnants all over your fingers to lick off.... so I've been told... enjoy
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Re: Re. If Words Should Fail
22nd Oct 2019 4:28am
Oh the melt in your mouth/finger licking kind just naturally go together. Can't have one without the other.
Re: Re. If Words Should Fail
23rd Oct 2019 1:00am
Words of the wise with great seeds of imaginary. I will extend you a pleasant evening and do stay warm
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23rd Oct 2019 1:04am
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23rd Oct 2019 1:09am
You are so easy... I always told you, such a teaser, one of these days, someone is going to corner you and make you prove yourself... hey, I am just saying, now go and get back under those covers and stay warm... and relax those eyebrows in surprise... enjoy:-P
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Re: Re. If Words Should Fail
23rd Oct 2019 1:35am
Guilty as charged. One of the benefits of writing is that ability. It is sometimes the delivery that can be questionable. I will heed your advice and blanket myself in the retreat of plush covers. It is always a pleasure. Enjoy your night!
Re: Re. If Words Should Fail
23rd Oct 2019 2:46am
The masculinity of a man who so chooses to exuberate charm and amplify such pleasing teases, is a man who is self-confidence in the ability of his nature’s calling. Enjoy your evening, tiger
SKC
SKC
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Re: Re. If Words Should Fail
23rd Oct 2019 4:20am
I will revel in that observation. I don't think I've ever been viewed in terms of exuding any masculinity. You have challenged me to view that in a very different light, having spent many times trying to define it within myself. Much gratitude for that. You couldn't have timed that any better. Again, a fabulous slumber wish for you, this evening
Re: Re. If Words Should Fail
23rd Oct 2019 4:49am
Baby... you woke me up to tell me something you should already know... now goodnight my tender poet and revel in your Hump Day tomorrow and take care of yourself as well.. wink
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