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Dry deserted place

We promised to go through fire for each other.
Now you stand there telling me the truth,
Shouting, what you really feel for me.
And that's all I didn't expect.
 
Can't you see the pain?
 
Why do you allow me to drift off to that deserted dry place?
Where suddenly nothing lives anymore.
Dark .. So dark
Please take my hand .. Save me!
 
We promised to go through fire for each other.
What happened in those last minutes together?
Now you are standing there,
hard words hit me, time and time again
right through my defense.. Non.
 
Why are you pushing me to that deserted barren place?
With every word you erase
What was previously our paradise.
Where suddenly nothing lives anymore,
love is just a big dark hole.
Sucked in, alone, without you
where are you?
 
Can't you see the pain?

We would go through fire for each other,
a promise we've made.
But my tears don't touch anymore ..
My words don't make sense,
cause I already lost you.
 
Voluntarily I am letting myself drift deeper into that dry deserted place,
which previously was our paradise.
Will let myself get burned by the fire, we would defy together.
I have no other choice. Consumed by pain.  
 
Lost myself again
Written by CArpeNoctem_ (CN_)
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