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TURN YOU ON
Baby can I have a few seconds of your time for there is something that we two need to have a conversation about tonight, for I know we both been grinding hard down to the core to get things right, but baby we are starting to forget about what is important in our lives as a man and a woman.
For what I wanna say is that tonight its gonna be different from beginning to end, for we are going out to have dinner and a few drinks then stop by the DO DROP IN JAZZ CLUB and mellow out and forget about the outside world, for tonight is about reconnecting our minds and hearts and spiritual souls on some smooth sounds and a smooth drink even to dance the night away just you and I dancing like theres no tommorrw.
For after that we gonna take a ride with the top down and let the wind blow through your hair as we enjoy the night air, so fresh like the open seas blowing through a chilly misty breeze then we gonna find a spot to park to watch the sun come up over the horizon, with you in my arms cuddle up closer than close as in cheek to cheek and skin to flesh and heart to heart and body and soul for only we will know what really comes next as we watch the raising sun come over our world.
For what I wanna say is that tonight its gonna be different from beginning to end, for we are going out to have dinner and a few drinks then stop by the DO DROP IN JAZZ CLUB and mellow out and forget about the outside world, for tonight is about reconnecting our minds and hearts and spiritual souls on some smooth sounds and a smooth drink even to dance the night away just you and I dancing like theres no tommorrw.
For after that we gonna take a ride with the top down and let the wind blow through your hair as we enjoy the night air, so fresh like the open seas blowing through a chilly misty breeze then we gonna find a spot to park to watch the sun come up over the horizon, with you in my arms cuddle up closer than close as in cheek to cheek and skin to flesh and heart to heart and body and soul for only we will know what really comes next as we watch the raising sun come over our world.
Published 18th Oct 2019
Author's Note
SO LET ME TURN YOU ON TO A NEW KIND OF LOVE THAT YOU NEVER KNEW EXISTED WITHIN THE WORLD, AS I DO IT BY MY ACTIONS OF MY WORDS THAT ARE SILENTLY SPOKEN FROM MAN TO WOMAN...AMAS SHAMEL
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19th Oct 2019 8:52am
You write fabulous juicy romantic personal stuff wow. You articulate swell. I also write such stuff on other sites, not here yet. You write long lines like me neh.
Keep writing and thumbs up.
Keep writing and thumbs up.
19th Oct 2019 12:08pm
thank you for the read much appreciated and yes i do get alittle long winded but sometimes that is how it flows but it depends upon were one is taking the story line, sometimes you can write a piece short and sweet and what you trying to say speaks volumes within that short piece, other times you need to tell a story like a story teller but remember your main goal is to be able hold your readers attention, for it just depends on what style you feel more comfortable with in your writing but the only draw back in writing a long piece, sometimes your readers may become lose in what you are trying to project through your writing when the piece is way to long as it drags out the story, for any story to be heard and truly understood from beginning to end you must have a beginning a middle and a end for the whole point of writing is to have your readers take that same journey with you to see to feel your emotions as well as your inner thoughts through unspoken words from the mind and heart to pen put down on paper...respect
